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She jumps like a graceful pulse point,
feet fleeting over the crooked flagstones and the
thistles of Marble Town.
There passes another slab, a
monolith to the dead
embedded with cracks left by the living.
Creepers steal her stilts and pull at the cloth.
"Fall! Fall, Sally!"
Their silent screams are nothing
but the snatch of rags in the weeds.
"Fall! Fall!" they chant, and her
Promenade is barred by the briers set before her in fields,
a thousand snakes laid out below like a bed
of pumpkin vines.

Then she sees him, rising out of the earth like sharp smoke,
a blend of wicked power and
delight in the dark
braided like twine with a spark of good
that sets him ablaze every year.

Her heart melts and her stitches blister in that fire,
just like the creepers snatch at her when she runs.
She is finally being pulled down.
"Fall, Sally," they say.

"The fire will catch you."
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Usually, I don't submit two to a contest, but I had this idea and I wanted to post it. So for the NBC contest, Up In Smoke
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This should win. It should win all the things. It...i-it just...my heart goes melty...you melted my heart, you beast!
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Mood: Aroused ~bookbrink Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh ho ho ho! Thank you very much, I hope I place. Hm, never been called a beast before.
... I like it
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I bet you do, dearie, I bet you do ;P
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~bookbrink Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm into that stuff.
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I know, lass, I know. You're speakin' my language :devilish:
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~bookbrink Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*french throat laugh*
Oh ho ho ho ho?
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh ho ho ho indeed, lassie.
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~bookbrink Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"Now go away! Or I shall taunt you a second time! Your mother was a hamster, and your father smelt ... of elderberries!"

"Is there someone else up there we could talk to?"
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